*Ring!*
”Joanna, time for breakfast!, shouted Mrs Barlow from the kitchen. You’re going to be late for school.”
”Coming mum“, replied Joanna rushing to her closet and quickly putting on her school uniform.
”Mum I want to fit in with the year 7 girls, so can I throw a Halloween party, just with a few girls.”
“Ok Joanna, as long as you don’t mess up the house because I’m working late, and make sure it’s just a few girls! Now hurry up and go to school".”, replied Joanna’s mum.
”Cool a Halloween party!”, Joanna’s little brother shouted with excitement.
“Joe this party isn’t for 9 year olds, you’re not invited.”, Joanna said.
“I’ll get my revenge Joanna," whispered Joe nastily.

“Hey John wait up”, Joanna muttered.

”Joanna what’s up?”, John replied.
”I’ve got a great way for us to become popular in New Town High School! We’ll throw a Halloween Party, tomorrow! I already organised it.,. Joanna suggested.
”Does your mum let you,” replied John uncertainly.
Joanna nodded., “Ok then.,. agreed John.
“Meet me tomorrow after school and we can get started.”

*BOOM*. Joanna heard a noise coming from the basement. No one was home, Joe was sleeping at Joanna’s grandma’s house, and her mum had a late shift at work. *BOOM*. The sound continued. Joanna slowly stepped on
to the cold, hard ground, scared to go downstairs but had no choice but to see what was making the noise.
The floorboards creaked under her bare feet .
Finally she came to her senses and realised it was just the family cat. She sighed with relief, and went back upstairs.

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