Last night I had a party toin celebrateion of my birthday, and it was amazing!
In the afternoon, I went to see if the ballroom was ready
, and I couldn't believe my eyes. It looked magnificent! The marble floor was so shiny that, you could see your reflection in it. The chandeliers glistened like huge diamonds and the room was filled with the smcellnt of fresh flowers.
A few hours later, the guests arrived and the
room was filled with the the sound of chatter and sweet music echoed through the ballroom. It was a fantastic party, and I was having a wonderful time.
All of a sSuddenly, the music stopped and the room fell silent. I looked up, and there, at the top of the staircase, stood a beautiful, young woman that I had never seen before. Her golden hair shone like the sun and. hHer eyes sparkled like stars. She was elegant like a balleringa and her smile lit up the whole room. I danced with her all evening and Ifell deeply, and completely fell in love with her.
The
n, something very oddstrange happened. When tThe clock struck midnight, and she screamed and ran out of the room.

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