myMy happiest moment when I travelling thiswas traveling was with my friend. I remember this day because I was travellingtraveling with this all friend to the same places and we stayed there six-daysix days, and we doing a lot of think as we wantdid many things. We went to Mountainsthe mountains and swimming and after tow dayswam. And tomorrow is my birthday is coming and: my friend dowill make a party for me and they are making for me sweethe will make sweets for me and bring the same drink and we are dancingthat he always brings, and we will dance and after that, I will cut the cake and we will eat and drink and play the same of game thisgames. This day is my favourite day because all of my friends do for memake a party for me, and when iI remember this I well camebecome happy because winwhen you see your friendfriends love you and remember this you can still your feel is varyvery happy because Maybe this day win you go with your friend for same. You never know when such a place it's very important for most of the peopleday can arrive. For me, my happiest moment winswas when my friend doingmade me a party: it's my most important day for me.

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