LQ: Can I edit and proof read writing? onceOnce upon a time, there was a little girl who lived in a village near the forest,. Whenever she went out, the little girl wore a red riding cloak, soand everyone in the village called her littleLittle Red Riding Hood. oneOne morning, little red riding hood Little Red Riding Hood asked her mother if she could go togo visit her grandmother, as it had been awhile since they'd seen each other |. "That 's a good idea," her mother said. So they packed a nice basket for Little Red Riding Hood to take to her grandmother. When the basket was ready, the little girl put on her red cloak and kissed her mother goodbye. "Remember, go straight to grandma'sGrandma's house," her mother cautioned. don 't"Don't dawdle along the way and please don' t talk to strangers; the woods are dangerous." don 't Worry"Don't worry, mummyMummy," said little riding hood i'llLittle Red Riding Hood, "I'll be carefu careful." Little Red Riding Hood noticed some lovely flowers in the woods, and she forgot her promise to her mother. she She picked a few, watched the butterflies flit about for awhile, listened to the frogs croaking, and then picked a few more.
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